Sunset outside my doorstep...

[broccoli]

#01 Some editting using DPP (software provide by canon)

#02 Original photo

Please comment if any improvment can be made...

With regards to #02 original photo...Is the exposure correct???

 

[zaren]

i like the processing in #1, good warm colour and texture in the clouds. but the hotspot of the sun and the rather uninteresting silhouettes of the buildings detract from the shot.

 

[eng_keow]

Suggestion: black out all the highlights in the foreground - pipes, roof-tops, etc. Juz leave the a black silhouette again the gorgeous cloud and sun. Use unsharp mask to refine the lines including the lining of the clouds.