Sunset at Punggol - with my family!


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jdredd

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nice shot. pity the water and sun is blown out.

did u use a GND?

also sun still seems pretty high. did u take any shots a bit later? would have got a softer light.
 

zaxh81

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jdredd said:
nice shot. pity the water and sun is blown out.

did u use a GND?

also sun still seems pretty high. did u take any shots a bit later? would have got a softer light.
GND won't help in this situation.
It's best to exclude the sun out of the frame or wait until it hide behind the cloud.

edit: also the baby's head merge with the background is quite distracting.
 

photobum

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Poor presentation. Technically, the blown-out sun is distracting. The baby's 'merging' head is a pity.

If I am correct, the lady in the picture is pregnant. Maybe you should shoot it from a different angle. I will tell a better story.

Sorry Bud, 2 out of 10 from me.
 

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I would frame the silhouette of the mother and child against the sun and the water reflection of the sun.

and you need a little sharpness as well.
 

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