sunset at pierce reservior


Bukitimah

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Nov 28, 2010
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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
- Composition and contrast.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
- Attempt to show the calmness and golden warmness in the late afternoon.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
- Taken using a tripod and manual setting.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
- I am not sure the floating platform should be included and the background is a bit too dim. Would a CPL remove the reflection of the sun? I am yet to venture into ND or CPL filters.
 

coolthought

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Jun 23, 2008
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not sure if this works.
Anyway, the placement of the boat and the floating pier in the frame don't work for me at all and this include a cut off pier and cut off boat. Can't quite figure out how best to place these 2 things for a good composition but one thing for sure, you haven't been moving around enough to look for a position with a much better composition.

Not sure if CPL will remove the reflection of the sun from this angle but I am quite certain it probably won't.
 

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