Sunset at changi beach


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kelvinTan

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Hi to all,

Here are my humble photographs i took of a beautiful sunset at changi when i was thr
Im shoot with my D100 & a 24-85mm f2.8 lens
Comments and Crits are welcome to help me improve ...

Pls feel free to comment.... :)

PS:Apologise for the last time i posted whr my image cant be viewed...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/KEL_TAN/DSC_8183.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/KEL_TAN/DSC_8164.jpg
 

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You caught a very nice sky.

About the 2nd photo. I wish the floating thing on the water wasn't there. While I understand your attempt at adding a foreground interest this one becomes an irritation (IMO). I hope you took more shots from a different angle coz the sky is really nice.

The horizon is also not level.
 

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beautiful sunset - wonderful pinks.

i find both ur shots tilted - making viewing them uncomfortable. intentional?
 

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2nd pic best. But too bad is tilted at an angle which spoilt the entire pic. This opportunity don't happen every time, you know?:)
 

kelvinTan

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hi to u guys,

who hav gave yr valuable comments to my photos,

ha....the photos was not tilted intentionally,

but i guess i was too overwhlmed by the sunset to capture as many image as i can

and jus compose and shoot with0ut watching out for the minor details

i ll be more careful nex time .

tks for the pointers ... and keep the comments coming in ;)

Cheers, Kelvin
 

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Hi Bro

Nice shots. Just one comment. You tend to underexpose.
First shot, I can't really see what much detail.
Second shot, great composition, very aesthetically pleasing, but I wish there was slightly more detail on the left.
 

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I really like the second photograph. I'm not totally crazy about the first one as it seems a bit dark...but then again, what do I know? ;) I really like to colours in the sky and how they're reflected onto the water.
 

kelvinTan

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hihi ...

tks for the advice .. prob i shld hav used a little fill flash so i can capture more details in the front ... but i guess i wan my highlight to be the water and the beautiful sky i saw hence i didnt emphasis too much on the features on the foreground .... :)

Will take note of this nex time if i got to encounter such scenery again
 

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Ooo.... the 2nd one did it for me - liked the natural colour captured at the right moment :) However, yea that tilting horizon - that's the only thing. Bravo !
 

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hi,
1st shot - could be better if the silloutte object is clearer.
2nd shot is great !
 

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Bro. nice sunset.. but watch the horizon.. the tilt makes me feel like a drunk man walking sideways.. haha

Can use photoshop to correct the tilt, change the contrast, saturation etc and maybe add a border or frame.. make it nicer.. that's my normal workflow anyways.. cheers
 

kelvinTan

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Hi Vstorm, PsionCraze, DarNikon

Will take note of yr advises and tips ... i ll try to do a little alteration to my image and i ll try to up load it again to see if its better... at the same time i ll try to uplaod some other image for more comments if i can....

Stay tune ... ;)
 

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Timber83

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Ok...now it looks much better. My votes to #2 shot.

Cheers..
:cool:
 

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Your #2 pic still rocks man!! The colour of the entire scene is really bo-be-zhao!:thumbsup:
 

kelvinTan

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hi hi ,

tks for the good feedbacks ... keep the comments coming :D

i ll try my best to come up with some other photos of other

type of shots to post here for some reviews

Cheers

Kelvin
 

kelvinTan

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hi Youhong,

I didnt use any special filter , its jus a UV filter only
i guess the credit has to go to the really beautiful sunset :)
that day or prob i meter at the right spot to produce the image

kelvin
 

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