Sunflower


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Dec 21, 2004
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nice flower, such a pity it get cropped off top & bottom. the white "thing" at the right bottom very distracting
 

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Thanks for the advice bro.

Yah i can't do anything about the arrangement of the flowers. Took it with a P & S camera though, using macro shots. If i fire the flash the petals of the sunflower will be too bright.
 

edwinywh

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Hmm,the whole pic looks too plain to me. So many distractions around the flower that u wan to show us.
Composition wise totally off. My eyes only see center of the pic and I see all of wat I need to see liao.Dun need to see the WHOLE pic at all.
Colours wise also not interesting enough.
Perhaps u have other angles of it to show us??
 

edwinywh

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nice flower, such a pity it get cropped off top & bottom. the white "thing" at the right bottom very distracting
I would say cropping of some parts to try to fill in the whole frame is good.Anyway u still know its a sunflower even some parts are cropped off,isn't it? :D
 

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Hi Edwin,

Any pointers to improve on what you commented? How to improve the composition and colous?
 

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I would say cropping of some parts to try to fill in the whole frame is good.Anyway u still know its a sunflower even some parts are cropped off,isn't it? :D
agreed with you... cropped off half of it & I can still tell its a sun flower, no doubt about it.
 

edwinywh

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Hi Edwin,

Any pointers to improve on what you commented? How to improve the composition and colous?
Hi,first of all... u must have find something special about this sunflower,thats y u shot it.

So,wats the special thing about it that makes u shoot it?
Shoot and show us wat u see in this sunflower.Go ahead and bring out the "thing" that attracts u. It will attract us too. :D

Just remember,fill in the WHOLE frame.Play with depth of field too. :)
 

redhillboy

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Taken this sun flower recently in Dreamland at Bangkok. The flower was blooming at that time to welcome the visitors.:)
 

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