Strike a Pose...


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Wolfgang

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Striking a pose... as usual, constructive critiques & comments are more than welcome. :)

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Aptly titled.

Was the top crop intentional?

The hair seemed over-done...right cheek too, that diverted some attention away from the unusually painted face.... IMHO..it lessen some of the "attitude" she is trying to portray.

Lastly.. you may want to lessen the left forearm shadow area... because of the way she holds the string of pearls.. the left elbow is partially blocked... it feels like the forearm is coming out of nowhere in the below photo.
 

CYRN said:
Aptly titled.

Was the top crop intentional?

The hair seemed over-done...right cheek too, that diverted some attention away from the unusually painted face.... IMHO..it lessen some of the "attitude" she is trying to portray.

Lastly.. you may want to lessen the left forearm shadow area... because of the way she holds the string of pearls.. the left elbow is partially blocked... it feels like the forearm is coming out of nowhere in the below photo.

Yeap, crop is intentional. :)

Thanks for the honest feedback though. :)
Much appreciated. :)
 

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