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afiend

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Hi all, here is a short series of Denise, taken this weekend. Haven't posted in a while. Tell me what you think?

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Not bad leh, brudder.
Go model shooting also bo jio.

Last one caught my eye. Anyway, I think the subject is too evenly lit for most shots, there isn't much contrast against the background. And some of the poses look a bit awkward.
 

SniperD

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what can I say...... Pic 1, 2, 4 ,6 are definitely keepers...

good choice of model and locations. #6 is the best IMHO. the backdrop compliments her completely. Techniques wise :thumbsup:
 

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I dun usually comment on model shots..but i find your style very nice and refreshing. Maybe having a good model helps..she looks very natural. The locations are all apt :thumbsup:
 

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Hi Zplus and Prismatic :D

Thanks to all for the feedback and encouraging words... :p

How do you all feel about the colour and mood/style?
 

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Excellent series, simply beautiful! I like the way you copyright your images, really nice! :cool:
 

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I dun usually comment on Pro's pics. ;p

but no 3,4,7, she looks like she's detached from the surroundings; i mean she's PSed in.

no. 1 works best for me as an advert piece.
 

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not hard to tell that you're the better of the lot that have shot the same model.

not all the shots work for me, but at least they look pretty decent, pretty good.

keep shooting.
 

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hi
nice
much better than mine :)
hope to catch up with u to learn more
 

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nice composition and coloring. i like. =)
but one thing imho, some straight ons aren't really the most figure flattering angles. but that part's also something of the model's job anyway..
 

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Thanks to all for your kind comments... :embrass:

wesley : sure thing... anyway thanks for the ride that day :p
 

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1,2 and 4. Like the way you break the composition down to apt use of lines and shapes, making your pictures so well balanced! Nice!
 

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1-3-4-6-7-8 :thumbsup:

2- the horizontal line is bit distracting imo.
4- maybe position her head differently?
5- dont think the pose works for her, not very flattering for her.
6- would be better if she was pointing straight at you.
7- pics by itself would be good, excellent work by putting them in a series.
8- nosebleeding now. :sweat:
 

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