Some Studio shots

[Evil_Angle]

 

[Winduhs]

Sorry, IMO, the DOF was too shallow, I think it might work better if at least the 'Mont Blanc' words are focussed.

 

[Evil_Angle]

Sorry, IMO, the DOF was too shallow, I think it might work better if at least the 'Mont Blanc' words are focussed.

Thanks for your comments, I was initially intending to draw people's attention onto the star at the top of the pen, as it is also a typical symbal for Mont Blanc.

 

[catchlights]

Thanks for your comments, I was initially intending to draw people's attention onto the star at the top of the pen, as it is also a typical symbal for Mont Blanc.

in this case, the star is too small.

you can go very close up, no point showing the whole box.

btw, the lighting is flat and boring for #2 and #3.

 

[rickygck]

i agree with Winduhs about the Mont Blanc word should be in focus. The star is too small to have any attention on it.

For the first picture i could not even figure out what are you trying to show? No point showing in silhouette.