G'day,
Looks like some fun you've had. Myanmar, hmm... wish I could visit someday.
The photos do capture the lifestyle pretty well. I like some, especially the man with the papers, just so... hmm... authentic if u ask me.
SOme pictures could be improved upon. The exposure was abit over in some. And the lighting was a tad harsh in some portraits ... highlights were clipped quite substantially, maybe some fill flash would help with less exposure.
Your style for the street shots (barber and newspaper) is classic nat geog style... flat perpendicular shot, which is good, shows detail and the scene well. But too much of it, can be boring... do try other styles... I particularly like wideangles... with large foreground image.
The headshot of the old lady, I wished a longer lens could be used if u were to go that tight. If u have to use that focal length, I would back off just a little. Last but not least, I do not like to mix B/Ws with colour images in the same gallery, but of course, thats me.
Well done.