hi chris
#1
bokeh looks very distracting
expression of model is good though
#2
not sure y the hands of the model look very long
black and white doesnt have punch
#3
skin tone looks very dead (maybe u were going for the desat look)
messy hair covering her right eye also doesnt work for me
sorry, but this time, all 3 doesnt quite work for me
no offence though