So my 1st time at shooting

[likepeas]

yeah so my dad bought a new camera and i tried it out.

1st :


comments please

 

[Redsun]

Hi welcome to CS
for the 1st pic,i find that there's nothing of interest in the picture
maybe you can help by telling us what you're trying to show

2nd pic,i think you wan to freeze the water in motion?
the shutter speed is too slow

keep shooting
oh btw you might want to take a look at the guidelines for posting in this section

 

[skyguy]

in this section of critique, we are only allow to put 1 photo here per week... and u put 2 le... try posting it at another section

 

[likepeas]

sorry.




Likepeas

 

[eikin]

do take note of the posting guidelines http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=273376

thanks.

 

[F2point8]

I also made the same mistake once. Don't worry, keep shooting. Enjoy your new toy...

 

[sprintist]

yeah so my dad bought a new camera and i tried it out.

1st :


comments please

hmm, remember to check your iso, what iso was it? looks alittle noisy.
read abit on composition and having a subject in the photograph which yours lack. Trying out a shot like this is normal but put alittle more effort in creating that picture i think its more worthwhile and i hope you find that very first picture of yours soon, keep shooting