Sky Boat Meeting a Kite


along83

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition, Color, Depth, any other areas

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Modern city skyline with a touch of human fun activity

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Marina Barrage at dawn, on a Sunday. Kite flyers at barrage is about to pack themselves and go, yet a few folks were doing their last attempt to fly the kite up before the night falls

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
happy with the Idea of the execution, but:
Composition - can the positioning of the subject be better?

Color - is this capturing enough vibrant color of the dawn (some part of the cloud is burnt out, can that be avoided?). what can be better done?

Depth - how much detail is it good for this composition (any suggested shutter speed, apacture, etc)

Cheers,
aLong

www.flickr.com/photos/chekyong
 

LArdius

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Feb 2, 2009
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#2
I think its a nice concept! I havent seen anyone else that has though of this before. :bsmilie:
 

Jun 22, 2010
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Sengkang
#3
this is the first time i can actually visualise the top og the IR as a boat lol
u must see it in a 2D sorta way to be able to tell the shape
haha
if nt its just a stupid curved boat that would just circle round and round lol

nice capture bro :D
 

Jul 13, 2005
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#4
Nice... Luv the sky :thumbsup:
 

wildcat

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#5
Nice! Would have loved a bit more space on top and bottom though... feels bit cramped. but love the sky and concept of sky boat meeting a kite. ;)
 

daredevil123

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Oct 25, 2005
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#6
Would be nicer if the placement of the kite is slightly more to the right and of course, more room at the top of the frame will help.
 

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