Bro,
Hope you don't mind i edited your picture a little... i think this is what the other bros meant by going closer... but its still not close enough...
and also personall i think taking the profile of a bird isn't very complementing... background also very distracting... stem of the plant also very weird... dunno how to crop it to look nicer...
But is does have very nice colours...
:thumbsup: try at "pa jiaoing" i'm still waiting to get my long zoom for my cam before i start to pa again...