Singapore Kopitiam B&W


biskandar

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and Old Feeling

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
The Old Singapore Kopitiam

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
The Rusty Kopitiam

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Morning Chat on Kopitiam

 

cabbySHE

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The description, the title and the picture content...all doesn't fit.

Look harder and you'll able to find some old surviving kopitiam, not using a restuarant to disguise as one.
 

xxdoggyxx

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#3
1: The old feeling?
Use sepia effect may help.

2: The old singapore kopitiam?
Capture the street name maybe will help us recognize de place of kopitiam, maybe geylang lor XX. Make sure you don't show us a kopitiam at orchard and its old.

3: The Rusty Kopitiam?
As in the houses above rusty? (My View:As long as the kopitiam have a B or A grade in hygiene, I don't mind if its rusty.)

4: Morning Chat on Kopitiam?
Saw 2 person having their breakfast while 1 is watching the newspaper.

Perhaps you want to try some really old kopitiam/coffeeShop. I live in CCK, thus i only know CCKs'.
1. Opp shengsong: Big prawn noodle
2. Keat hong market: 2nd floor(their marvelous chicken rice)
3. 216 Coffee Shop. If you don't know where this, i can't really help... Its old and famous.

Cheers :D
 

frostiee

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Hmm the first impression of the picture doesn't relate me to the coffee shop and the people below, instead i placed more focus on the houses and windows above. There's simply too much details in my view.

Maybe focusing more on the people drinking coffee and showing more of the coffeeshop would help.

My 2 cents.
 

biskandar

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#5
Thanks guys for all the comments and suggestions .

I thought it was a old kopitiam feeling , ok than , will try to find another real old kopitiam place like you mention above ;-) .
 

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