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webmaster03

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Haven't posted for awhile...been busy with school. This is from a recent shoot. C&C welcome. I know there's room for much improvement. =)
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Rashkae

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Are you shooting with expired film? There's just no other real explanation for the poor color tone and sharpness in pic 1.
 

webmaster03

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Are you shooting with expired film? There's just no other real explanation for the poor color tone and sharpness in pic 1.
hmm yeah i knew something was wrong with that shot but i didn't really know how to correct it. thanks for pointing it out.
 

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I kinda like the color tone in pic 1. Maybe that's just me...

I'd watch out for the awkward cropping off of Amanda's legs there... LIKE OUCH ! And the tree trunk behind her head in pic 2.

Just some constructive suggestions. ;)
 

webmaster03

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I kinda like the color tone in pic 1. Maybe that's just me...

I'd watch out for the awkward cropping off of Amanda's legs there... LIKE OUCH ! And the tree trunk behind her head in pic 2.

Just some constructive suggestions. ;)
thanks mate. for pic 1 actually i kinda like the tone too but i agree with the comment tt its not sharp larh...poor shooting. cropping prob firstly i anyhow experimenting and i shall note the comment that it ain't nice so shan't do it again haha...
 

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I believe its bad control of flash. TS should go for perfection with ambient light first before moving on with further lighting :)

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webmaster03

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yeah thanks. its one of the first few times i took out my flash gun ><
 

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Hmm if possible try shooting in raw and change the setting later if u aint really sure. Just my 2 cents~
 

webmaster03

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i did shoot in raw haha but i really messed up that shot la no 2 ways abt it =)
 

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