sibu fishing expedition


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eloera

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hello all.

this is a series of pictures taken by me on my third shoot. really hope to have a honest critique from you peeps to know where and how i can improve on my composition and techniques.




here's the website : www.reticenteden.blogspot.com
please feel free to comment and thank you for the trouble!:D
 

eikin

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pic 1. too bright sky, too dark waters. not your fault, most cameras cant handle such situation

pic 2. sloping horizon, not a good idea on a shot with fluid bodies. the water would all drain away.

pic 3. slightly tilted horizon, nothing to capture viewers attention. pay attention to focal point.

thanks.
 

eikin

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eloera, since you presented it as a series, maybe you'll want to describe how the pictures work together?
 

eloera

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eloera, since you presented it as a series, maybe you'll want to describe how the pictures work together?

hmmmm sorry, but for now, they aint a series anymore.. they are just inidividual photos that are on their own!

i will need opinions on them so i will know how to improve on my techniques! ;)
 

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hmmmm sorry, but for now, they aint a series anymore.. they are just inidividual photos that are on their own!

i will need opinions on them so i will know how to improve on my techniques! ;)
:think:

as per Critique Corner guidelines, can you specifically choose 1 picture only, for critique?
 

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