Shadow&light

[pantan]

I am trying out with lights and shadow, this was taken from a bunch of leaves, can you pls give your comment on this picture? How can I do better?

Thanks for your time and comment.

 

[Michael]

interesting approach and composition. where to improve?
> sharpness: not enough or rather i a problems to see where the focus is. DOF seems to be shallow and in original size nothing is really sharp and crisp.
> exposure: develop it with a bit more contrast

otherwise very nice colour rendering, keep it up