Serenity


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Tianz16

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Took the picture to show and let ppl feel at peace.
Serenity:
the state or quality of being serene, calm, or tranquil; sereneness.

please do advice if the composition is okay. Thanks for all C&C.

 

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i cannot see your main focus of the picture.

i also cannot see anything interesting or eye-catching in the picture.

one quick look, i would think that all is OOF.

i'm sorry, this picture doesnt work for me.
 

Rashkae

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I don't see serenity at all. In fact, I see clutter and "what am I supposed to look at?" confusion.
 

HTCahHTC

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yeah. no point of focus. and is it me, or is the picture kinda blur?
 

night86mare

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the messy background and the fact that your apparent subject is shovelled to the side of the picture makes the composition fail utterly - hence the comments so far, that it is cluttered, that they cannot see what your "subject" is.
 

zac08

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Focus is on the second bell of the pagoda, but the whole pagoda is very dark and the blurred green BG of the tree is distracting.

Try mebbe a different angle which will allow a better exposure of the pagoda as well as not get blown highlights from the sky.
 

Yappy

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Very difficult to have a focus....
 

Tianz16

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thanks a lot to everyone for your comments so far.. will be out shooting more pictures and be back for more...
 

espion

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got potential.

essentially need to correct for underexposure and maybe include more pagoda and eliminate the bright light coming between the bells and the leaves.

I think ur focus is Ok - the underexposure makes it hard to be seen.

and finally dun title ur pic ... maybe just say pic #16 or something like the way all CSers do here.

a nice pic is a nice pic ... ;)

PS: How did u meter? Most matrix/evaluative metering wont lead to this situation?
 

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