hhho Senior Member Nov 2, 2003 2,144 0 36 West Visit site Aug 14, 2008 #1 Hi! This was taken from Mandai Zoo last weekend. I would like to seek your comments after seeing it Thank you very much. Cheers,
Hi! This was taken from Mandai Zoo last weekend. I would like to seek your comments after seeing it Thank you very much. Cheers,
C calebk Senior Member Jul 25, 2006 10,587 0 0 Clementi Aug 14, 2008 #2 You may want to take a look at this guide on how to do a proper write up when seeking critique.
hhho Senior Member Nov 2, 2003 2,144 0 36 West Visit site Aug 15, 2008 #3 Thank calebk for your reminder. just a short wirte up to this picture - orang utan 1. in what area is critique to be sought? I will like feedback on the composition. zoom in to capture its face expression and especially its eyes is my focus. 2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work? I want viewers to share the same feeling through this picture. From its expression, it seem to be sad if you agree with me. 3.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture Personally, I like this picture because it really capture the mood of orange utan through its eyes and face expression. Thank you for your comments.
Thank calebk for your reminder. just a short wirte up to this picture - orang utan 1. in what area is critique to be sought? I will like feedback on the composition. zoom in to capture its face expression and especially its eyes is my focus. 2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work? I want viewers to share the same feeling through this picture. From its expression, it seem to be sad if you agree with me. 3.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture Personally, I like this picture because it really capture the mood of orange utan through its eyes and face expression. Thank you for your comments.
N night86mare Deregistered Aug 25, 2006 25,474 3 38 www.pbase.com Aug 15, 2008 #4 i like the idea, but i think this would work better: a) as a portrait composition, simply because i do not need to see the hair by the sides b) slightly tighter c) with greater depth of field, else the oof jaw is quite a painful distraction
i like the idea, but i think this would work better: a) as a portrait composition, simply because i do not need to see the hair by the sides b) slightly tighter c) with greater depth of field, else the oof jaw is quite a painful distraction
hhho Senior Member Nov 2, 2003 2,144 0 36 West Visit site Aug 16, 2008 #5 Thank night86mare for your comments. here's Photo Properties Camera: Olympus E-300 Shutter: 1/20 sec Aperature: f/4.9 ISO: 100 Focal Length: 283.0 mm Tripod without flash
Thank night86mare for your comments. here's Photo Properties Camera: Olympus E-300 Shutter: 1/20 sec Aperature: f/4.9 ISO: 100 Focal Length: 283.0 mm Tripod without flash