For some reason, I felt the OOF is too fast as it goes down. Can try smaller aperture or don't let her lean front so much?
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I love the depth of tonal range in this picture, and the placing of the model is quite okay. However, it is that "why haven't return me my money" type of expression again :bsmilie: a sensual expression would be great, or some expression not that "loud" if you know what I mean
the hair is great, but the smile looks very forced. is she tense?
Ok. This one, again, the smile. somehow this pose reminds me of children. Can try a lower perspective and try shooting slightly below the nose.