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garou12

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It's that expression of being refreshed by splattering water. 'nuff said.
Caught this cute boy over at Vivocity last weekend.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57280077/

C&C Please. =)
Subtextually and context you're truly captured the moment. Can practically feel the joy that he's feeling for the relief from the hot sun. The look on his face is priceless. The vignetting helps pull the viewer towards him as well. Composition wise it works although personally i'd prefer it if it wasn't centred and he's framed in either the left or right side with more of the waterworks in view. But that's my preference :angel: Good job though! O and i might go with different title than refreshment to make it stand out somemore. look at his expression try to describe it in one word and break out the Thesaurus...it'll help with ideas :)
 

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Subtextually and context you're truly captured the moment. Can practically feel the joy that he's feeling for the relief from the hot sun. The look on his face is priceless. The vignetting helps pull the viewer towards him as well. Composition wise it works although personally i'd prefer it if it wasn't centred and he's framed in either the left or right side with more of the waterworks in view. But that's my preference :angel: Good job though! O and i might go with different title than refreshment to make it stand out somemore. look at his expression try to describe it in one word and break out the Thesaurus...it'll help with ideas :)
noted on the title part thou. i'm running out of words! ha =)
 

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Sometimes no need for words. Maybe an expression would do: "Shiokahhhhhh!!!"
 

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