mmm ...was that an imprompt shot?
It looks very much like a snap shot to me. Perhaps you can try rearranging your props alittle.
Perhaps it would be better if you would have framed the gentleman's face inside the glass and still catches his reflection on the other smaller glass.
The way you have captured it, is not flattering for the gentleman.
Sorry it didn't work for me.
But it's a creative idea which you are trying. Keep it up I am sure in no time I shall see a spectacular output from you. =)