1) composition isn't too bad, the recurring image in the distance lends some strength to it and adds quite some interest
2) problem is the exposure, the underexposure renders the colors murkey and makes the picture seem less vibrant than i suspect it could be
even if you had intended a moody mood - it's not here not there, if you get what i mean
i did try playing with it in photoshop, somehow the details are lost to shadow so i guess we have to make it moody, here's my try
there is something missing from the photograph though, i can't exactly say what it is, perhaps the arrangement of the leaves is not very aesthetically pleasing.