Really noob photos


Dec 13, 2010
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#1
Hi all, my first time posting a photo here since I got my first dslr recently..

Do give me some comments.. Thanks..




1. in what area is critique to be sought?
What can be improved?
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
A nice macro with the reflection of the photographer
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Normal day out shopping feeling happy
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I'm pretty happy with this picture as a newbie :D
 

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Sep 17, 2008
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#5
why don't know how to say? very bad? :(

Merry X'Mas tho...
i'll say no idea what the image is trying to say bah... are u testing out equipment with this shot, or telling a story?:)

and merry x'mas to you:)
 

Feb 17, 2009
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#6
Hi all, my first time posting a photo here since I got my first dslr recently..

Do give me some comments.. Thanks..

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
What can be improved?
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
A nice macro with the reflection of the photographer
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Normal day out shopping feeling happy
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I'm pretty happy with this picture as a newbie :D
personally i dun really like to take this kind of pic, if i were to take, i would find a clear / shiny ball instead of red.
if u wan to show yourself find one that really can show not one that dun really show.
also ask your female frd and the "person" away.

if can show abit more of the ribbon else remove it totally. abit of here n there no working here.

am glad u are happy with your shot. main thing of shooting is being happy and be expressive abt it. enjoy and shoot more
 

spree86

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Feb 3, 2009
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#7
why don't know how to say? very bad? :(

Merry X'Mas tho...
Just like allen said, seems like a test shot so dun really know what to say. The reflection would be better if you clean of the dust on the ball though, the dust is kinda distracting.

Merry X'mas to everyone:)
 

Dec 13, 2010
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#8
thanks all for the comments.. and yes.. it's really a test shot.. nth I wanna say about this photo.. i'll try to post sth that has a meaning to it soon.. :)

Thanks!

btw: it's a rough surfaced ball.. not dust.. :x
 

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