Ray of light


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whoswho

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Captured the Sun behind the clouds during mid-day on a boat. A couple in the picture is intended to add some "flavor" to the picture.

Exposed for highlights.



C&C greatly appreciated.
 

Kit

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The couple of heads is quite disconcerting. Either you do without them altogether or you include more of them.
 

jelimon

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love the rays bursting from behind and beneath the clouds! it's almost biblical. same thing, the heads are tad distracting.
 

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the black mass on left is unbalancing, too heavy: I would rather just have the sky alone. the people silhouette may help to balance but as it is, too insignificant and too close to the centre.

I dunno if this is a crop version, which I suspect is not, and therefore there is no more room for other compositions. And also I do not know if u have other shots as the boat moves along changing the perspective.

Overall I think it needs a new perspective altogether. The great light in the skies can't save this pic.
 

whoswho

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Thanks for the critique guys. :D Greatly appreciate it.

Too bad, I didn't have other better perspectives because the island on our right and the sun/clouds were behind and our boat was going in one direction. :dunno:

Will this do?
 

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The couple of heads is quite disconcerting. Either you do without them altogether or you include more of them.
I agree..

Either have the full thing
Or just leave out the heads.. Two heads floating there is pretty disturbing.. =D
 

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think u recrop is even less than the first ... question: why didnt u take more than one shot?
 

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