the pores are too obvious that will distract viewers from the theme. try using lens blur on all except the eyes and minor lens blur on the flow of tears. repackage it in black borders with thin white stroke. and a "branding" and title as well.
yeah! nicely done!:thumbsup: the white border is uneven?
i did a little PS on your pic in my com earlier. however your version seems better cos i applied too much lens blur! pm your email to me if you want to take a look.