Ponggol Sunrise


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espedine

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Taken at Ponggol beach, during the sunrise
Comments please :)

Taken with canon FTb on superia 400
 

syl

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Highlights are too over-blown. Also taken too long after the sun has risen!
 

m3lv1nh0

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I like the grains and the sunlight on the left. The human subjects adds an interest point to the pic and also create a balance. Good stuff. If u could, pp away the distracting red thingy on the floor and also adjust the tilted horizon.
 

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I agreed with the rest the horizon is slightly tilted. And the next I would like to share is try to have the ground level with a third and leaving the sky with the two thirds. Happy clicking.
 

kangwei

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i personally think that the contrast and saturation should be adjusted during post-processing. so as to not let the sunshine be so bright that it blurs the other stuff in it.
 

night86mare

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understand that you are using film, but the color palette here is very, very unpleasant. the yellow is sickly in tone, the blue is so intense.. surrealism is fine, but taken too far it works against you.

that said, i think the compositional idea is great. :)
 

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