Pls help to critique

[ckgoh]

Hi guys...can you help to give feedback on how to improve these pic?

there are 4 pics. i am suppose to capture some life or some objects in campus

new to all this...

just bought my camera and hooked on it liao...thanks for your comments

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/7818/pic19tq.jpg
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/3591/dance38qf.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6193/dance24kv.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6220/dance12cu.jpg

 

[n0d3]

I don't see anything. Broken links?

 

[blive]

saw the picture. Colours quite vibrant. I would have prefered a close-up of the girl's face though. Try a close-up on the face. it would look different.

 

[doug3fflux]

yep nice background colours, good bokeh, but i think you should have metered off her white blouse...her forehead the white reflection abit overexposed..

Douglas

 

[ckgoh]

hey douglas
thanks!

 

[ckgoh]

harlow...blive...thanks!

 

[Spectrum]

Frankly speaking, what are your pics trying to tell?

 

[ckgoh]

hi Spectrum

i am suppose to take some pic to depict some fun/vibrant life in campus

totally new to taking pics le

 

[doug3fflux]

hey douglas
thanks!

no porburm. u ask for comment, we give!


Douglas

 

[espion]

good shots (can't see the last two) - got potential. work on it. shoot more. hear more comments.

 

[ckgoh]

good shots (can't see the last two) - got potential. work on it. shoot more. hear more comments.

thanks for yr comments - just trying out with my new hobby. which is the better pic out of the 4?

 

[espion]

still cant see all ur pics. only the girl with braided hair in green and the skylight roof. the former is better - the joy on her face is nice to see, the latter is too easy a shot, and dull too.

 

[ptwong]

the girl with the braided hair is good but the guy's is not as good. too tight, should show a bit of hand?

 

[ckgoh]

the girl with the braided hair is good but the guy's is not as good. too tight, should show a bit of hand?

hi ptwong...thanks so much...still learning lor

 

[ckgoh]

still cant see all ur pics. only the girl with braided hair in green and the skylight roof. the former is better - the joy on her face is nice to see, the latter is too easy a shot, and dull too.

hihi dun know why cant open le...and thanks for the comment...trying to play with my camera more often...