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ckgoh

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Hi guys...can you help to give feedback on how to improve these pic?

there are 4 pics. i am suppose to capture some life or some objects in campus

new to all this...

just bought my camera and hooked on it liao...thanks for your comments

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/7818/pic19tq.jpg
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/3591/dance38qf.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6193/dance24kv.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6220/dance12cu.jpg
 

n0d3

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I don't see anything. Broken links?
 

doug3fflux

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yep nice background colours, good bokeh, but i think you should have metered off her white blouse...her forehead the white reflection abit overexposed..

Douglas
 

ckgoh

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hi Spectrum

i am suppose to take some pic to depict some fun/vibrant life in campus

totally new to taking pics le
 

espion

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good shots (can't see the last two) - got potential. work on it. shoot more. hear more comments.
 

ckgoh

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espion said:
good shots (can't see the last two) - got potential. work on it. shoot more. hear more comments.
thanks for yr comments - just trying out with my new hobby. which is the better pic out of the 4?
 

espion

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still cant see all ur pics. only the girl with braided hair in green and the skylight roof. the former is better - the joy on her face is nice to see, the latter is too easy a shot, and dull too.
 

ptwong

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the girl with the braided hair is good but the guy's is not as good. too tight, should show a bit of hand?
 

ckgoh

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ptwong said:
the girl with the braided hair is good but the guy's is not as good. too tight, should show a bit of hand?
hi ptwong...thanks so much...still learning lor
 

ckgoh

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espion said:
still cant see all ur pics. only the girl with braided hair in green and the skylight roof. the former is better - the joy on her face is nice to see, the latter is too easy a shot, and dull too.
hihi dun know why cant open le...and thanks for the comment...trying to play with my camera more often...
 

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