Playing Hide and Seek

[biskandar]

There are two bugs is playing together on one flower , i took this one with macro lens on Singapore Botanical Garden.

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
The feeling of playing hide and seek

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I took this picture early in the morning , have a fresh and nice weather in that time .

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
The playing feeling

 

[intrance]

if the bugs are the main subject, then its only right, they should be in focus and sharp..
dont u think so?

for composition.. i might go for tighter crop..

 

[biskandar]

Yes, the fly is not focus. Actually this is an accident shot, I didn't realize there are bugs on the flower.

 

[derrickder]

Not bad but the bugs are very distracting.

 

[eqesg]

quite good, but it's a bit blurred it's difficult to figure out that the two bugs are the main subject of your composition.

 

[The Moving Chair]

I find the bee outside rather distracting. might as well PP away. hahah.