Photoshoot with Zhang


modelinn

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Hey Martyn, good to see your efficiency here! Lol..
IMHO, they are pretty good except for the slanted horizon for no 1, the dead centre position of the face in no 2 and 4..oh and I just realised your pics are all in landscape, was that in purpose?
 

jnet6

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not here often anymore
1. https://500px.com/photo/129618095/700-3298-jpg-by-martyn-lim
model not in focus, is focus on the grills behind her.

2. https://500px.com/photo/129614047/sunkissed-by-martyn-lim
model's right arm over burned.(makes viewer's eyes go to her arm instead of her eyes). Can tell that you are trying to get the model into some mood with her eyes.

3. https://500px.com/photo/129611649/zhang-by-martyn-lim
This is good, just watch out for overblown on her face when adjusting contrast/highlights/clarity(LR), especially on her right side where the light is reflected(are you using reflector? as can see some catchlights/reflections on her eyes)

4. https://500px.com/photo/129614133/zhang-by-martyn-lim
Try square crop for this pic. model's teeth is not symmetrical for this shot, not sure where went wrong.

5. https://500px.com/photo/129611535/zhang-by-martyn-lim
Try square crop, this photos is just nice for technical part. mood is there.

Keep up the gd work.