Photogenic June


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eow

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A tfcd session with the lovely young lady today :)

 

Kongo

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Nice.. like the shots & the model as well :D
 

eow

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Kongo said:
Nice.. like the shots & the model as well :D
tks kongo:)
 

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Just some minor nick pick on photo no.2 on the back of her hair. Other than that, it's perfectly expose, balance compo with a finely minor tilt and comfortable expression on the model.

As for no.1, to me i always prefer natural lighting compare to fill in flash. She bended her neck a little too much.

Still, your no.2 photo is a keeper for a long time.
 

Koelsch

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I think she turned her head a little too much in #2. And she's really pretty and photogenic alright. ;p
 

Will03

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wow............. i like no. 2 !!!
 

~Arcanic~

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same as most others...

#2 is really good, nice exposure and good lighting~
 

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no2 :thumbsup:
 

onghm

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I really like the composition of #2.
Very good use of perspective.
:thumbsup:
 

natnivek

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Wah bro... Your pics getting better leh... :)

Only nickpick is #2, her right leg's position is a little awkward don't you think? My 2cts.
 

simon80

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so wheres this place?
 

simon80

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tks ..
hope i don sound like mountain turtle :bsmilie:
 

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nice shots, although not natural light, I like #1 though.
What had I missed.
 

Wlyang

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# 2 has got my vote! :thumbsup:

I wish I was there that day.
 

eow

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Glad u guys like it
Here another pic of this young lady;)
 

jfoo

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eow said:
Glad u guys like it
Here another pic of this young lady;)
juz some pointers. if you shift a little to the right or she moved a little to her right, the model's head would have covered the awful green stain glass window for you.

another thing, there's an open door on the left. if it was possible to close it, i think the symmetry of the location will look better.

one last thing, sorry to point out all these, the folded arms pose is okay (a defensive posture in a portrait shot....hmmm), let's not go there. but her legs. you got to watch how she stands as well.

i notice something near the inside of her left leg. is it litter or dirt on your lens. suggest ps it out but if litter, remove it before shooting.

there's also a slight tilt in the perspective, easy to correct in ps.

hope this helps.
 

eow

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Tks for pointing out the flaw
 

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