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This shot was taken at LCK cemetery. Slightly before sunset.


#Cemetery Life#

It was already edited using PS.

Would need some comments regarding the:
1- composition/framing
2- color tone
3- color contrast
4- Usage of PS

Any other comments would be very much appreciated.

First time in photography & first time using PS.

I hope the picture wld be shown, have included a link too. Cldnt get the picture posted here.....
I have followed the guide in http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=94574
& I'm still unable to show the picture
 

nigel84

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it appears that the colour tone and contrast had been pushed too much... Resulting in unnatural colors sumdges in the clouds. Do a HDR with this pic, it would show the magnificent colours of the clouds as well the other elements in the pic. And the clouds were dynamic, which i supposed would work more, if u showed more details of it.
 

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it appears that the colour tone and contrast had been pushed too much... Resulting in unnatural colors sumdges in the clouds. Do a HDR with this pic, it would show the magnificent colours of the clouds as well the other elements in the pic. And the clouds were dynamic, which i supposed would work more, if u showed more details of it.
Oh yeah, if u didn't mention it. i wouldnt knw, esp bot the color tone & the contrast....;)
Sorry, but what is HDR?

Thanks for the comments.
 

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Oh yeah, if u didn't mention it. i wouldnt knw, esp bot the color tone & the contrast....;)
Sorry, but what is HDR?

Thanks for the comments.
hdr - here

super good hdr user - here

whatever needs to be said, others have said. i just add on that if you want a photo to be realistic, use hdr, but not too liberally.
 

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Hi,

Another pic awaiting more comments.

This is a pic of a tulip taken in LCK cemetery.
It was a color shot but i turn it into B&W & colored the tulip alone.

Kindly comment on the color tone & contrast.
The sharpness of the pic.
Composition & framing too.


I do hope the pic will be able to appear.
 

calebk

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Hi,

Another pic awaiting more comments.

This is a pic of a tulip taken in LCK cemetery.
It was a color shot but i turn it into B&W & colored the tulip alone.

Kindly comment on the color tone & contrast.
The sharpness of the pic.
Composition & framing too.


I do hope the pic will be able to appear.
You might wanna read through the guidelines for posting in Critique Corner - one photo per week for critique.
 

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You might wanna read through the guidelines for posting in Critique Corner - one photo per week for critique.
oh yeah, i read bot it already.
But i thought since there isnt any replies or critics regarding my first picture, it should be safe to post a new pic.

Sorry again.
 

eikin

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as mentioned, it's 1 picture per week for critique request.

since there's no interest in continuing the critique of the first picture, thread is hereby closed.
 

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