how abt juz focus on the glass and get different angles at it?
juz part of it etc.
its not a very engaging angle(IMO).then maybe have the can behind the glass to juz get a hint or something of the brand.
the logo n name very important in commercial shot, kinda dark that area, improve the mood on the setting, cos the way i c, selling point abit weak, cannot get attraction for ppl to c second time, also shadow be careful of it