I think the close crop works for me, pulls the attention straight into the face as well... also the thing about shooting a beautiful face upside down? it holds attention a tad longer too.. - people tend to turn to see her right side up... :thumbsup:
One little distraction to me is her this whitish reflected spot on her right finger as well as her ring.. (pulls me off her eyes) and showing one side of the bikini with the otherside 'unrevealed' might not have worked as well as showing the other 'partially'.. looks slightly unbalanced.
Good stuff really... and if its a random snap and shoot, it's probably as decent as an image should be. :thumbsup::thumbsup: