Hi all
I recently was aquainted to this forum by a friend
He specifically mentioned the high quality of feedback in the critiique corner
I need an honest opinion on this picture
I am a newbie & compositional tips are most welcome
Thanks
This shot has no subject. nothing that tells u to look at me...
Thanks for the compositional tips
I am using a canon S3is, no filters
The colors are nice no doubt but like what some has mentioned, it lacks a theme or subject in your shot.
Quite frankly, as the picture is loading top down, I was attracted to the rich colors and expecting it to load further showing more parts of the leaf/tree but was disappointed when it stopped just there...
actually, i find that if this shot is in a series would be cool... something like a prelude... like 1 part of a big picture... but sadly, it isn't... nice try thou...
agree with DCA abt the 2nd pict...1st shot is nice, but the sunset not really defined, but its a good job done afterall. cos the clouds are soothing. a minor nitpik, crop 1/16 of the top portion then 1/8 of the right. Try it, dun have to post here, u'll get what i mean.
2nd shot, the 'coconut tree leave' is blur, not due to handshake, but too near to you, its not beyond the infinity range, most likely if me, i'll remove it away from my shot. and this shot lack the base, the trees sticking out of nowhere is a distraction. this shot however, if u take portrait, with the weird looking tree silouette and the sun alone will be perfect.
3rd shot, nicely done like i've said previously, just that the sun a little too low. but u horne the skills, try again next time... this time on the leaves... make 1 of the centre of attaction.
:thumbsup: keep it up!
agree with DCA abt the 2nd pict...
"this shot however, if u take portrait, with the weird looking tree silouette and the sun alone will be perfect." - DCA