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denniskee

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can consider shifting to the left to include the tree on the left, so as to form a frame?

edit : sorry, mix up me left and right. what i mean to say is to shift to the right include the tree on the right, shift up to include the brenches, than you have a frame.
 

eikin

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it's definitely not a good frame, the elements don't quite gel together. but the scene does have some feel to it. give it a sepia tone, it may just work.
 

ortega

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crop away the foreground and use the tree and the bench as the foregrond
include the tree on the right
some sky details would also be nice to complete the park scene
also a bit more leaves on top
 

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