outdoor portrait

[d2xpeter]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
exposure control, point of view. composition

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
exposure control in outdoor, to get a pleasing point of view

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
noon with bright sun

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
quite pleased with exposure. point of view may be a bit low

 

[zaren]

Suggest cropping away the bottom part of the photo (railings etc) in a square crop to draw more attention to the subject (loving couple) and to simplify the image.

 

[d2xpeter]

Suggest cropping away the bottom part of the photo (railings etc) in a square crop to draw more attention to the subject (loving couple) and to simplify the image.

ya, this is good.
Create a suspense of what they are looking at.