Our Small Farm


Jul 3, 2012
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1. in what area is critique to be sought?

a. Exposure
b. The area that can be further improve by Photoshop.
c. The biggest fault I should avoid in this picture.

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Afternoon when the Sun rised on its peak


Camera setting
Panasonic G1 MFT , ISO 200, 14mm, f/3,5

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

Learning Photoshop

 

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JayMosin

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Jan 28, 2013
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#2
Beautiful landscape :) Although I think the colour temperature could be slightly warmer. It appears to have a bit too much blue. I do like the composition though.
 

duffydufs

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Apr 20, 2009
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hope you dont mind my comments on your photo

1. exposure its quite ok but bit saturated.
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3.maybe you can make your picture "warmer"? by adjusting your white balance.
4. i cant comment on photoshop as i only using lightroom and iphoto.

by the way i dont know what is the red dot on your photo on right hand corner. is it a dust spot or some flare?
keep shooting and hope to see more of your photos. :) cheers
 

thoongeng

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Jan 26, 2010
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hmm to me it looks unnatural... overall feels too saturated, and not sure if the sky at this time should look darker than the foreground

maybe you can share what are you trying to achieve with photoshop (a particular 'look'?), or some of your steps then the experts here (not me =p) can give more pointers
 

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