Orang Utan II

[biskandar]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Animal Photography

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Went to orangutan area, trying to achieve moody and shyness of his character.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
It was raining that time, only this guy dare to stand under the wood, and the others went back to the cave.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Too tight, i think.

 

[David Kwok]

Just my personal feel. If you use another title for the photograph, I would have assume it's to that title because the focus of the photograph is not there. If what you want to project is shyness, the eyes will be a good indication. I would like to suggest using a side profile of the orang utan with a side glare from the animal. It's not going to be easy for you need several tries to get the right angle and glare. It will give the shyness effect. Here in the pic, the focus is the finger. Unless the finger is the trademark to orang utan, then I say you can go ahead. Right now, I see no story told.

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Animal Photography

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Went to orangutan area, trying to achieve moody and shyness of his character.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
It was raining that time, only this guy dare to stand under the wood, and the others went back to the cave.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Too tight, i think.

 

[The Moving Chair]

Where is the face?

 

[fastfocusing]

It is just one lump of fur ball.