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All that I can see
Just this stick in the sea
But it reminds me of something
that I had to agree

It reminds me that there is only one love...one life...

 

The_Cheat

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I see rocks and floating debris other than that one stick. You may consider doing away with those to enhance the subject of the one stick.
 

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