One lazy Sunday morning


Bukitimah

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1.in what area is critique to be sought?
I am trying to take landscape shot and just couldn't find the right composition.

2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I wish to show a lazy Sunday afternoon away from the busy vehicles and people. Back to the good old days of kampong life.

3.under what circumstance is the picture taken?
Photo taken on a Sunday late morning with tripod.

4.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I am not sure I have captured the feeling with this shot. Please help to give suggestion how I can improve.
 

phyll

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Hard to capture the kampong feeling with the rubbish bins and building (toilet?) behind, I feel.

Do note that the trees have been cut off at the top of the photograph.
You may wish to compose more carefully in future to prevent such accidents.

Just my two cents' worth.
 

Bukitimah

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Thanks phyll, that is a security hut lah. How about this I took over the weekend?

 

ionicbeam

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I find that the 'lazy' feel will be better brought out with human elements. Would otherwise feel more like deserted scenes.
 

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