1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Mainly composition, but if there are other things that can be improved on as well, please guide thanks
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
A sense of movement and stillness at the same time
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Slight drizzle, on a bus in Tokyo
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think it looks beautiful, but definitely has alot of room for improvement, which is why i posted it here. It was kinda like a experimental shot, i thought of it while on the bus, decided to give it a try.
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