its cool, its nice, but its so common, this scene has been taken many many times by different people. i guess the only way to make it outstanding is to wait for the right lighting (and yes, office lights too), for example, during some point of the day of the year where the sky's fiery red or something. definitely not easy, but that's how 5 star photos r produced! some of my humble thoughts
Thanks you all and really appreciate it. For those who is a little at lost, I should had placed my older shot. The shot is not meant to whether it was a great shot or not, but to see whether I could have done better from the older shot, its a try out thing for improvement. By sincerely, thanks for the comments, really appreciate it.
And yes, it was taken on Wednesday so most of the office lights were off due to public holiday.