imho, for the 1st pic, the top left lights are quite distracting. would be better to crop off.
also, the purpose of the pic is to show the blue board, the seasons greetings board or the bell above it? i was trying to find a focal point. the white building in the background also..like want-to-show-dont-want-to-show.:bsmilie: i think the position that u'r standing to shoot isn't quite interesting. the pic turn out pretty messy if u ask me.
i'd go nearer to the lights and focus on the bell or focus on something ;p
for the 2nd pic, 1st thing that jumped at me was the overexposed fullerton. actually i feel that the whole pic is too bright. also, i realised for both pics, both ur corners have something distracting. was it intended? :think:
sorry but both pics dun work for me.
juz my 2 cents (frm a non-technical photographer's point of view):sweatsm: