Night Before Ramadan

[biskandar]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and Ramadan Feeling

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I took this shot at Geylang Serai, found interesting ramli burger with many customers there, and i converted into B&W because i need to expose more about the people surrounding that area.

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
It was dark and humid at that time, there are many people there.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
No interest point , i guess .

 

[Axedeee]

Nice, but will be better if there's some eye interaction. The people in the pic are looking all around but not at each other. The atmosphere seems gloomy except for a floating smiling eerie figure at the top right corner.... *shivers*