natural pattern.


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jolee6

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hi i am very new to photography and to clubsnap too. am very glad that i could find a site where i could see nice photos and get come comments and advice from you guys. :)

this was one of the photo when i 1st started few months back. it was very a nice day after rain, and very nice blue sky. when i looked up at that site, i saw the brunches made out some pattern to the empty sky, and i think it's interesting. kindly advice if the photos looks busy?!

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the idea is there..
the pattern is nice..but the leaves on the branches is the one thats messy

branch pattern with minimal leaves would be better in my opinion..:angel:
but cannot be you go and pluck the leaves b4 taking the shot rite..(certain things beyond our control ;) )

other than the messy leaves good shot,good idea and good composition. in my opinion
 

jolee6

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the idea is there..
the pattern is nice..but the leaves on the branches is the one thats messy

branch pattern with minimal leaves would be better in my opinion..:angel:
but cannot be you go and pluck the leaves b4 taking the shot rite..(certain things beyond our control ;) )

other than the messy leaves good shot,good idea and good composition. in my opinion
thanks Die Blende, I see your point, and now i can see why i feel it's bit messy.. i din realised it's the leaves but now you mentioned. :bsmilie:thanks!!
 

nigel84

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you might want to watch ur exposure a bit. There are certain areas which looks like over blown to me.
 

jolee6

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hi nigel, thanks for your advice. i did a lomo effect with photoshop to cover up some light. what you guys think? :)
 

microcosm

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It does look a little too busy and the lamp's clean lines are marred by the background. Might want to change to a wide angle and move closer to the subject for a slightly more dramatic effect too.
 

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