my watch.

[drumma]

 

[drumma]

anyone care to give any pointers?

 

[kuantoh]

Try using MF to get the words on the face of the watch to be sharper. Might also wan to try using a smaller aperture. Highlights blown in certain areas so quite disturbing.

I see some water droplets to the right on the strap. Nice idea which got me to think if a small streak on the face would give it more punch :think:

Might want to move the watch further back coz the front edge of the table is quite distracting. A clean, black table cloth would bring out the feel of the silver watch better i think.

 

[drumma]

Try using MF to get the words on the face of the watch to be sharper. Might also wan to try using a smaller aperture. Highlights blown in certain areas so quite disturbing.

I see some water droplets to the right on the strap. Nice idea which got me to think if a small streak on the face would give it more punch :think:

Might want to move the watch further back coz the front edge of the table is quite distracting. A clean, black table cloth would bring out the feel of the silver watch better i think.

thanks for the advice! much appreciated!