My vietnam friend


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vizuel

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A friend and a free model :bsmilie:
I personally like the composition of the shot.
C & C are welcome

 

wlcling

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i second your thoughts! :thumbsup:
 

jeanie

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distracting background.
unflattering dress.
super messy hair around shoulders
distracting hairclip.
not enough face shown to depict her happy expression
chopped off right hand.

this is a pure snapshot.
 

vizuel

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distracting background.
unflattering dress.
super messy hair around shoulders
distracting hairclip.
not enough face shown to depict her happy expression
chopped off right hand.

this is a pure snapshot.
ouch :confused: haha ... but thx points noted.
this was taken after a trip to the zoo. Kindna all sweaty liao. haha.
sad to say, it was'nt a pure snapshot. Will continue to improve

one more to add to the list (right hand chopped) BAD CROP haha
 

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A wider aperture should blurr the background and isolate your subject. :)
 

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The location is bursting with potential. All the glass and water can make for interesting reflections. Go there and explore again with the various angles :) Better prepare your uh... "model" too.

There's like a whole list of places I'd like to revisit just to reshoot imperfect photos I've made.
 

jeanie

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vivo city allow photography ah?i'm surprised.
 

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I think when they just opened, photogs flooded the place :p

So long they are not like you jeanie. Lugging all your studio gear out into the field and setting up stands, I generally think that nobody can stop you fast enough from grabbing a shot.
 

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Other than the problems mentioned, I quite like the feel of the picture - looks natural.
 

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I think when they just opened, photogs flooded the place :p

So long they are not like you jeanie. Lugging all your studio gear out into the field and setting up stands, I generally think that nobody can stop you fast enough from grabbing a shot.
huh?i've not done that b4 lah!siao meh?
 

Youhong

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huh?i've not done that b4 lah!siao meh?
You can bring your strobes to Rochester park... your strobes can go on batteries or not? Remember to jio me go.... haha... ;p
 

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You can bring your strobes to Rochester park... your strobes can go on batteries or not? Remember to jio me go.... haha... ;p
dont OT in people's thread lah.:sticktong
 

vizuel

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The location is bursting with potential. All the glass and water can make for interesting reflections. Go there and explore again with the various angles :) Better prepare your uh... "model" too.

There's like a whole list of places I'd like to revisit just to reshoot imperfect photos I've made.
yea... will definately go back there again to try. hehe
 

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