My version of Sunbirds at SBG

[jbma]

I am still learning so please give me some comments or feedback to improve my shots, especially from the pros.

 

[rainman]

Hi pal.
I'm not an expert..far from it actually. Personally I think u have a good catch. Good composition for #2 esp. Not bad for #1,#3 the last 1 focus is out. I feel that the color saturation can be slighly stronger (personal preference

What is the DOF u use for all these shots anyway?

 

[jbma]

Thanks for your feedback. Agree with you on that. I think I was at 5.6 and 8.

 

[solomon76]

Think the pics are a bit over-sharpen , i think would look better if they are just of the box

 

[ccplim]

Nice catch man! Love the first one. The color of the second pic seems abit saturated. #3 and 4 seems a little OOF to me.

 

[jbma]

Nice catch man! Love the first one. The color of the second pic seems abit saturated. #3 and 4 seems a little OOF to me.

Thanks bro.

 

[Newguy69]

Hi bro,

Pros comment: None (my skill & knowledge still at the infant stage)
Layman comment: POWER MAN!!! :thumbsup:

Cheers

 

[Zenten]

Great shots, Bro . Btw, what equipment are you using?

 

[erwinx]

1. the pics are unnecessarily large and difficult to view
2. Your sharpest pic is no.2, the others are on the soft side
3. pic no.4 the yellow on the breast seems badly clipped - huge amounts of posterisation.

so overall, pic 2 has the most potential, so keep on trying. If you want more detailed advice, you should give full exif details.

 

[jbma]

1. the pics are unnecessarily large and difficult to view
2. Your sharpest pic is no.2, the others are on the soft side
3. pic no.4 the yellow on the breast seems badly clipped - huge amounts of posterisation.

so overall, pic 2 has the most potential, so keep on trying. If you want more detailed advice, you should give full exif details.

Thanks erwinx. Points noted.

 

[jbma]

Great shots, Bro . Btw, what equipment are you using?

Canon 10D with Sigma 50-500